Work in Progress
Before
After

This page didn't change that much.

I just out lined the page in pen and added some color to the back ground characters.

Originaly, I was going to add a fifth panel showing the indication of lockdown.

But, i just put it on the fourth panel and I changed it from text to a covid symbol.

While I was doing this page, I felt like it was missing something to convey the message and tone.

I saw that I was using a lot of red, so i decided to put it on every panel on this page.

You might have noticed that I put a lot of emphasis on the thumbs up and thumbs down.

I came up with the idea to use this to show the protagonist's overall mood. One again on this page, i drew a silhouette of Dawson to show the return of campus instead of using words.

Here, I put the campus at an angle.

But, I eventually came up with the idea to make it like the first page.